Sonija, you did a wonderful job on this doujinshi and I can only say to everyone else who reads this: Commission her, it is more than worth it! I spent a lot of time looking at each page and panel, and all in all the quality is constant and nice to look at! At first I was wondering how well you'd manage, since you didn't know the characters at all, and only had a translated fanfiction to go with ;_;! But I have to say you once again convinced me of your skills and made me 100% sure to commission you again, whether it is for a doujinshi or a single artwork. You amaze me ňo ♥
On this page I like the last panel where he whispers in her ear, looks sexy and cute at the same time! The Nocturns are all beautiful and exactly what my friend prefers, so...nicely done >w<! The page looks clean, but not too simple.
FUFUFUFU is the only thing I can add XDDDD
It really makes me sad that no other HnM-fans commented on this...OTL You did such a good job!